Monday, 6 February 2012

Music magazine - Contents page drafts


My first installment of feedback was quite negative. I was told to include more thumbnail images, scale down the editor's picture. Also, the main image was quite stretched and it needed to be different altogether for anchorage. Finally the text was quite large and there wasn't enough detail on my articles.

I was pretty much told the same again, I was having difficulty with editing issues.
My feedback was more positive this time. I was told that the editor's note was ok and the main image was not stretched. I was also told that I could use more thumbnail images. The contents on my articles still lacked detail too.

My feedback for this draft was positive too. I was told that the thumbnail images are suitable and that I could possibly use some more photoshop editing skills to make my main image look more attractive. I was told to maybe alter the masthead title text as it wasn't that visibly appealing, even though it fits the genre.
For my final feedback, there was a lot of positivity. I was told that my contents had more detail and that it gives my target audience more of an idea what the subject is about and that the white border behind the text made it look more organised and made the text look more readable.

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