Audience feedback from Ben Warneck: the first major thing would be fonts; they're not remotely exciting. The front cover text doesn't scream at me.
The photo on the cover doesn't scream anything
Nice cropping, rendering and potential airbrushing though
Some errors in punctuation on cover
No capital letters
Subtle choice of colours, reds and greys and blacks for a metal magazine.
Yellow? Think again maybe.
Double page spread looks good, but the yellow is hard to read and the top left logo is small and scraggly
"Awsome exclusive"I would suggest not to underline where it says Back and Better than before:
it's icky.I like the varying font and the fact it's bold.
Contents page is very good, Danny Mail has been re sized oddly though. I like the red page numbers,
and the fact each section is clearly, well, sectioned. The choice of colours here is good, but the yellow needs to be eliminated.
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